Over the past few weeks, we have a student teacher in our hub, his name is Mr Loan, he has been working alongside Mr shaw, so for literacy Mr Loan has been teaching us about children's book and some different authors.
It was all leading up to us creating our own children's books for the new entrance kids in kiwi, I found this quite challenging to make it interesting but I think my book turned out quite well.
Mine is called The Messy Microwave, it is about a microwave that isn't being treated very well and has to find something to do about it. The moral of my story is to treat people with kindness.
This is my finished picture book, I made it using google slides. Let me know what you think of my book!
Hi there India - Grace! My name is Lucy and I am a student from Korimako.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading you book and learning about how to be kind.
There are barely any flaws, so good job.
Have a nice day! :)
Hi Lucy,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog and for reading my book, happy you enjoyed reading it! although there is a few things I would change thank you for saying it is good.
Have a good weekend :)
Hi India-grace, it is Aliah here. I really like that in the story people started to clean the microwave just to heat their food. There are barely any flaws so good job.
ReplyDeleteHi there India-Grace I really liked the messy microwave presentation.
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